This is shaping up very nicely, Johnathan. The pacing is really good (unlike my interminable serial) - there's a good balance between answered/unanswered questions, and the drip-feed of information. The characters are engaging as well, even if I don't personally like them - obviously, liking a character is not a prerequisite to engage with them. But they are good characters.
So, I am enjoying diving into this world you have created and I'm looking forward to what's to come...
Thanks for reading these first few chapters, Evie, and so pleased (and relieved) you're enjoying them. The main protagonist is a necessarily complicated character. Lots more to come!
This is shaping up very nicely, Johnathan. The pacing is really good (unlike my interminable serial) - there's a good balance between answered/unanswered questions, and the drip-feed of information. The characters are engaging as well, even if I don't personally like them - obviously, liking a character is not a prerequisite to engage with them. But they are good characters.
So, I am enjoying diving into this world you have created and I'm looking forward to what's to come...
Thanks for reading these first few chapters, Evie, and so pleased (and relieved) you're enjoying them. The main protagonist is a necessarily complicated character. Lots more to come!
Yeah - I was getting the impression she's 'complicated'. Complicated is good though for a MC. She's certainly interesting, that's for sure...
I'm also looking forward to finding out more about this big extraterrestrial smarty.