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Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

This is shaping up very nicely, Johnathan. The pacing is really good (unlike my interminable serial) - there's a good balance between answered/unanswered questions, and the drip-feed of information. The characters are engaging as well, even if I don't personally like them - obviously, liking a character is not a prerequisite to engage with them. But they are good characters.

So, I am enjoying diving into this world you have created and I'm looking forward to what's to come...

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Sue Mansbridge's avatar

A blunt knife...

Sounds painful! lol

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