I'm not confirming or denying anything about the next chapter. From a writing craft perspective your impatience might be the fault of how I've written this chapter, in that it's proceeding too slowly towards the peak (or trough) of the next action beat. Or maybe it's a good thing that my readers are desperate to know what's going to happen next?
There's no fault whatsoever in your writing. If it was a book that someone had in their paws then my comment wouldn't even register in their brain. It's not even a serialisation thing tbh. I mean you could easily have done a double-length chapter after all. So I was actually being I don't know what the word is. A good word, though. Expressing the fact that I'm very much invested in what happens to our three intrepid heroes. I think it's good to have little cliffhangers now and then in a series.
Oh! You're teasing us now, having to wait till Thursday for what happens next...
I'm not confirming or denying anything about the next chapter. From a writing craft perspective your impatience might be the fault of how I've written this chapter, in that it's proceeding too slowly towards the peak (or trough) of the next action beat. Or maybe it's a good thing that my readers are desperate to know what's going to happen next?
There's no fault whatsoever in your writing. If it was a book that someone had in their paws then my comment wouldn't even register in their brain. It's not even a serialisation thing tbh. I mean you could easily have done a double-length chapter after all. So I was actually being I don't know what the word is. A good word, though. Expressing the fact that I'm very much invested in what happens to our three intrepid heroes. I think it's good to have little cliffhangers now and then in a series.
Ok, good. Let's see what happens!