Chapter 1 - Act I - INGRESSION
First installment. - Not bad...
Thanks!
I enjoyed the interaction between the two characters and the grit of their relationship. The worldbuilding is fantastic, as is the storytelling. 👏
Coming from an expert worldbuilder, that's a real compliment! Thank you.
You’re a great writer, Johnathan. Also, the pacing of the story is so good, it pumps me up.
...and Paysha has barely begun her journey. There are plenty of adventures to come!
It’s a promise that things won’t get boring in this Substack fiction corner.
I promise!
First installment. - Not bad...
Thanks!
I enjoyed the interaction between the two characters and the grit of their relationship. The worldbuilding is fantastic, as is the storytelling. 👏
Coming from an expert worldbuilder, that's a real compliment! Thank you.
You’re a great writer, Johnathan. Also, the pacing of the story is so good, it pumps me up.
...and Paysha has barely begun her journey. There are plenty of adventures to come!
It’s a promise that things won’t get boring in this Substack fiction corner.
I promise!