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Sue Mansbridge's avatar

I love Paysha's Banshee! Her closing comment was superb. Some interesting hints of further action to come. Well done.

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Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

I must write some more action scenes (or just hurry up and get to them). This one is very good indeed and I wouldn't want to be outdone. Especially not if you're suggesting there's an MPD thing going on here. Unless it's some side effect of this rebirther thing.

Anyway, and of course this is an excellent acceleration of pacing for the Act-change turning point.

I think you should write more energetically and ruthlessly more often. You're very good at it. Release your own inner Siouxsie.

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